Whats your opinion on this poem of mine?

wow! thats really good!I luv the ending, it finishes the poem really well.Um Idk if u want to, but ithink u should change the title. Imean its up 2 u but idk i think the title is kinda obvious, like its expected 4 u to call the poem left for dead. like you could call it " dreadful days" r sumthin, uno? sumthin less expected. But uno u dont have 2 , Its still a great poem with or without the title change! :o)